Dreams was my first time writing I got a -2. I noticed that I have improved this year. I learned a lot from Erin and I learned how to use Citations and how to embed a quote.I am most proud of my Into the wild essay out of all of my essays.
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We had to write a essay about House on mango street. We did a bunch of planning and a bunch of grading. we first started off with our intro paragraph we. Then we made the two body paragraphs. Then we made our conclusion. we put this all together and made our essay.
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Into the wild was a essay I wrote about the Character name Chris McCandless from the book Into the wild. I had to write a timed essay and it was either going to be Into the wild or the hatchet so i chose Into the wild. After i got my grade back I got the chance to revise it. I worked really hard on the essay and tried to figure out how to use a citation for quotes. After talking with my academic coach I learned how to use citations and put them in my essay. I was happy after I was done and i felt very confident about it. I got a 2+ but I still am trying to improve.
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